A sentence can stop
Each reply has a limit. Status, narration, and speech share it. Past the limit, the sentence stops in the middle.
Rewrite. Do not treat the broken half as a fact for the next chapter.
Longer is not better
Keep facts short, few, and not repeated. The same fact three times steals room from the scene.
Detail used only in this chapter stays in the chapter. What must still be true later goes in the library.
The language slips
The model sometimes slides into another language, or a character that only looks similar. The setting was not deleted.
Rewrite the chapter. Write names in the library in the exact form you want, without abbreviations.
RewriteMemory
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